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Wednesday, January 19, 2011

Writerly Wednesday ~~ Novel Editing Tips


Good stuff on tap today, writerly blogging friends! Lynnette Labelle is sharing her top 12 tips to editing your way to a better novel. Her article will appear in RWA Online's site at the end of the month, so you're getting a sneak peak! After you enjoy Lynette's tippage, how about leaving your favorite editing tip or trick in a comment? Or a problem area you struggle with? Maybe some kind fellow blogger (or Lynnette, if she has time) will offer a possible solution.

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Novel Editing TipsBy Lynnette Labelle


As a developmental copyeditor, I do more than correct grammar and punctuation. I also look at the big picture. In a fiction manuscript, I watch for mistakes made in plot, characterization, dialogue, pace, tension, conflict, and more. The beginning should hook, the middle shouldn’t sag, and the end should satisfy. Unfortunately, writers have a difficult time finding these flaws in their work. Sometimes they’re too personally invested in a particular scene or phrase. Other times, they simply don’t know what to search for. Here’s a list of several issues I encounter frequently.


1. Show, don’t tell: Put the reader inside the character’s head. Show him how the character feels and what she experiences. Avoid “telling” words like: heard, saw, noticed, smelled, thought, etc. For example, instead of saying, “She saw Jim kissing Joelle and wanted to kill them both.” You could say, “Jim kissed Joelle, and Nancy’s stomach turned. How could he do this to her after all they’d been through? Well, if that jerk thought he was getting away with betraying her trust, he was in for a big surprise.”


2. Unrealistic dialogue: Sometimes dialogue is realistic, but doesn’t suit a character. For example, a grandmother wouldn’t say, “Dude. That’s so rad, man!” However, there are times when dialogue simply isn’t realistic. If people wouldn’t say it in real life, your characters shouldn’t say it either.


3. Boring dialogue: Always make sure there’s a point to the dialogue and that one character doesn’t go on and on and on. We all know someone like that in real life, but we don’t want them slowing down our story.


4. Dialogue that reads like transcripts: This happens when two (or more) characters are talking and the writer doesn’t have them do anything more than that. In reality, people never just sit and talk, even when they’re sitting and talking. They might fidget, take a sip of coffee, look around the room, gaze into each other’s eyes, etc. All of these actions tell us more about the characters and possibly the plot. Conversations should also show the characters interacting with the scenery to remind us where they are. The atmosphere in a rowdy country bar would be different than at a quiet, romantic restaurant.


5. Scenes that don’t move the story forward: This is a tough one because there are times when a scene is well written, but it just doesn’t fit with the story. Always ask yourself what’s the purpose of the scene. If it doesn’t move the plot forward or develop the characters, then the scene’s purpose is in question.


6. Too many details: Some writers write beautiful passages that go on forever. Others describe every little detail in the scene, leaving nothing for the reader to imagine themselves. Both of these scenarios should be avoided. Readers like just enough information to allow their imaginations to fill in the rest rather than having the author spoon feed them every last detail.


7. Not enough details: On the other hand, sometimes writers don’t add enough details, so the reader feels like the characters are living in a box. Balance between both styles is key.


8. One dimensional characters: These characters haven’t been fully developed. We might know what they look like and what they do for a living, but we don’t have an idea as to who they really are. Show us their personality. How is this character different from that one?


9. Flawless/perfect heroes or heroines: Nobody’s perfect and people don’t want to read about someone who is. Boring. Plus, it’s harder for readers to relate to the hero or heroine if he/she seems too good to be true. Characters need to be at least a little flawed so they can learn and grow by the end of the novel.

10. Unlikable characters: While it’s okay for us to hate the villain, we don’t want to hate the hero or heroine. Granted, sometimes either one of these characters may come across as blunt, bitchy, aggressive, or strong willed, but they must have some sort of vulnerability, something that shows, deep down, they’re good people.


11. Flat beginnings: This often happens when a writer starts at the wrong place. Either too far in the past or too far in the present. (Prologues are an exception.) The ONLY place to start your story is at the inciting incident. What situation or event changed your character’s life forever?


12. Lack of GMCs: Many writers have never heard of GMCs. Others know the acronym stands for: goals, motivations, and conflicts, and may even believe they understand the concept, but more often than not, they don’t. If a story’s GMCs are missing or weak, the book probably won’t sell.


Writing a novel and writing one that’s publishable are two different things. In the end, it all comes down to knowledge. How well do you know the craft? This list is a good place to start.


Lynnette Labelle is a certified copyeditor and proofreader, and the editor of LoveBytes, RWA Online’s newsletter. She offers writing coach services and teaches courses one-on-one as well as in a group setting. Look for her next online course called “Hook, Line, and Sinker” coming soon. Check out Lynnette’s website and blog HERE! 

13 comments:

Liza said...

This post is so helpful. Numbers 4 and 6 will have immediate impact on how I write. Thank you!

Kathryn Magendie said...

Great tips! thanks to Lynette & Angie!

Dawn said...

Great tips, Lynette!

Bethany Mattingly said...

great tips :)

Nathalie said...

Oh, I'm so glad I came across your blog and this wonderful post. A lot of great tips here. Glad to be a follower!

rosaria said...

Now, now! What a great list; what an enormous task for any one person.

Jill Kemerer said...

Hi Angie and Lynette!

These are awesome tips. I tend to write spare scenes in my first draft and add setting details and action tags in later drafts. It's really hard to come up with everything in one shot!

Vodka Mom said...

I always learn something cool when I come visit! And I am totally coming to visit you this summer. Make the beds and put on some Gumbo.

Terri Tiffany said...

Thanks for the list. I need to go do some weeding now for the noticed, smelled and thoughts in my work:)

Gaston Studio said...

Fantastic tips... and thanks for sharing them!

Barbara H. said...

Very helpful advice.

Kittie Howard said...

So many great tips! Thank you, Thank you!!

Patti Lacy said...

WOW! Great tips!!! I like this tweak in your blog!!!

Miss my more regular stops here!

Blessings, Angie

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